Mayor Richard Wrigley expressed confidence that the Gubernatorial debate, which begins at 7:30 p.m. this evening, will have a positive affect on his candidacy. He added, “Gov. Red Davidson is a master of dirty politics, but I won’t will not take any of his bologna baloney.” (4)
For her birthday , the nine-year-old girl invited five good friends over for ice cream and cake. The chocolate cake was so tasty that any of the children could have eaten it all, but they carefully divided it between among themselves. (4)
The new head of the Department of Journalism, Dr. Deborah Dunwoody, Ph.D., recently bought a house at Six 6 Riverside Drive in San Mateo, a city in the San Francisco Bay Area. (4)
ROME, Italy – All around the World, Roman Catholics today listened as the Pope pope delivered his homily. (3)
1) You don't need to capitalize gubernatorial. It's effect, not affect. Don't abbreviate Governor in a quote. Good catch on bologna. (+2)
ReplyDelete2) 9-year-old girl (+2.5)
3) Dr. or Ph.D., not both; the rest is good. (+3)
4) Look up dateline format for Rome; don't capitalize world (+2)
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