Saturday, February 13, 2010

Lead 5

A Springfield Pipe fitter suffers third-degree burns and remains in serious condition Wednesday night, after accidentally crossing a power line carrying 15,000 volts with a piece of angle iron.

Bard College alumni and actor, Chevy Chase was appointed to the colleges board of trustees last night during an alumni diner.

1 comment:

  1. Good leads, just clean up a few minor problems.

    1) lowercase pipe fitter. Tighten up: ... after accidentally touching a 15,000-volt power line with a piece of angle iron.
    2) Get rid of the comma; the college's board (it's possessive, not plural)

    18/20

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