Saturday, February 6, 2010

Lead 2: Air Crash

Reasons for the country's worse air disaster in 3 years remains unsolved, after a plane carrying 131 passengers barreled into the ground outside Pittsburgh, killing all aboard. The crash occurred as the Chicago originated plane was attempting to land.
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  1. AnonymousFebruary 9, 2010 at 12:09 PM

    You're not supposed to be writing a news analysis here; you're writing a hard news lead. So focus on "what" happened, not that fact that we don't yet know why it happened.

    6/10 - please revise

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